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    Slim MC vs. Nemean - Slim has won via NS.



    Welcome to Round 2 of The OnlyOne Writing League!





    Slim MC


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    Nemean




    Line Limit: Maximum: 40 Lines/400 words


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    Please list the topics in order of preference. 1-4. Here are your choices:


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    3. Tiny Roses

    4. Choking on your Allure


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    by Slim MC

    He left his house at midnight, as his wife began to sleep
    With plans of finding funds for the high he hoped to keep
    QuikMart was the target, to rob the clerk that lied within
    He thought not of the morals, just the bugs under his skin
    Gripped the gun inside his waistband, took just one last breath,
    Held it far away from him as though he were pointing death
    The woman screamed and hit her button, and wails from an alarm
    Meant cops would be there soon to unveil all of the harm
    He grabbed the money and ran, knowing he wouldn’t make it
    Straight to his dealer to shoot meth before his headache split

    He did ten years in jail, and wasn’t even halfway done
    Several decades still stood between his next day of sun
    He beat a guard down with their nightstick, fled the prison bars
    All alone he was, but he knew that help was never far
    His wife lived a mile away, he rushed into her home
    Cornered her in the kitchen and talked in temperate tones
    “I know everything’s different,” he said, “Trust me, babe, I do”
    “I just need somewhere to lay low and, if you can, some food.”
    “God no!” she screamed, “You asshole! Fuck you! I’ve had enough.”
    Anger boiled within. He grabbed the club, “Bitch! Batter’s up!”

    He stared at his wife on the floor as he drank some water
    Blood dripped out of her dead mouth, evidence of the slaughter
    No time to reflect, he heard sirens in the distance
    He can’t flee out the front, the back offers less resistance
    Through the woods he flew, not once pausing to take a break
    When the pain hit his mind, and his chest began to quake
    A story his mind could make, a puddle became a lake
    His wife stood with him happy and for once his eyes looked awake
    The first time, he thought he took drugs, really it’s drugs who take
    There’s bugs under his skin again...but now he knows that shit’s fake

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