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    Ballad of a Cyberpunk

    http://i67.tinypic.com/2iueq0j.jpg

    I see her there across the bar, my yearns' become a thirst.
    I can barely catch my breath, my lungs begun to burst.
    She's happier without me, my words speak up...
  2. Thread: Blood Sport

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    Blood Sport

    http://i64.tinypic.com/292lenb.jpg


    I witnessed his majesty, his code of honor's a strategy. The evidence is weaved along
    seamless stitches that thread the tapestry ("A Masterpiece!") of...
  3. Enoch Immediately able to pick up on where...

    Enoch



    Immediately able to pick up on where this is going. I like the direction.


    I like the line "sick of initiation one way conversations" I think anyone
    that has the slightest bit of...
  4. DIASICK So I assume from this, that this...

    DIASICK



    So I assume from this, that this section represented a dream of the narrator's
    own death, by being shot? .... the rhythm/flow is on point and the rhyme.


    Nice, carrying the rhyme...
  5. SELF ACTIVATE Ok first off, even if the pic...

    SELF ACTIVATE

    Ok first off, even if the pic didn't give away the setting
    you adding a date/time/place was great because I read
    this in my head with an accent (especially the dialogue)



    So...
  6. Ok so I am happy that you both leaned in the...

    Ok so I am happy that you both leaned in the directed I expected to see this topic go
    which is biblical/mythological

    THE MAGICIAN



    Loving the content right away (admittedly you threw me off...
  7. Thread: v.008

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    dope verses from both of you, sorry i never got...

    dope verses from both of you, sorry i never got around to dropping as planned.
  8. https://image.ibb.co/hkbzhw/storm_widescreen_wide....

    https://image.ibb.co/hkbzhw/storm_widescreen_wide.jpg

    The Oddest Sea

    Hafa adei! Welcome aboard! The expectancy is thin.
    You're sick of working office, hours -over 70 - if trimmed?
    Extorting...
  9. Sticky: First and formost I just want to point out that I...

    First and formost I just want to point out that I enjoyed the fact you split the conversation pieces up and divided them, not only with space but with color as well. I think people catch alot of flak...
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    Diasick - first of all I was unaware that...

    Diasick

    - first of all I was unaware that your topical game was this dope (that's my fault for being gone for so long and not being around for the GSLs)



    first my OCD tells me to point out...
  11. VAMMY THE GOAT First of all Vammy this verse...

    VAMMY THE GOAT

    First of all Vammy this verse was dope as your ever-elevating
    skills continue to impress. Since you've made it this far, this quick
    I gotta really go through this with a fine...
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    first off. this section - flow af. sounds like...

    first off. this section - flow af. sounds like the beginning of an epic poem/theme song.


    I like where you're going with this so far. With the "mimic change" "symptoms change
    fade to euphoria"...
  13. Eunique - I love how had a creative...

    Eunique -
    I love how had a creative 'outside-the-box' approach to this topic. I had several different theories on how the topic could be done, but being trapped inside one's mind due to sickness...
  14. (it's the same feed, I know but I'm too lazy to...

    (it's the same feed, I know but I'm too lazy to re-word my thoughts lol)



    this section was cool. I feel like it was more so the set-up to get to the
    meat of the topic, but it serves its...
  15. http://i63.tinypic.com/2z4k8eg.jpg The Joy of...

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    The Joy of Painting

    Through a critic's eyes, I'm criticized. Still, inside this sharp..
    throe of pain, the flow could take the real Poseidon's heart.
    Losing...
  16. Thread: The Ringing

    by Rude
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    Quality was top notch. (The camera I used to use...

    Quality was top notch. (The camera I used to use was shit ,still used hi-8 tapes lol) Cinematography was on point. (idenote : Idk if it was meant for the audience to hear but just before she stops @...
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    Wrongfully Accused

    Wrongfully Accused
    (The story of Sarah Good)

    Essex County, Colonial Massachusetts - 1692

    Life used to be normal, then ventured through turpitude.
    I was wed to a man, that's indentured to...
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    Sticky: updated for predictions, since I didn't predict...

    updated for predictions, since I didn't predict very much at all last night.
  19. I like 2 and 1 but I'm game for any of them.

    I like 2 and 1 but I'm game for any of them.
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    Sticky: I really need to make a mod award/badge it's one...

    I really need to make a mod award/badge it's one of the only ones left lol


    Edit: I hadn't had time to think about predictions yet (and I don't like giving myself preconceived notions - but I was...
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    Hi. this started out humorous (in twisted...

    Hi.



    this started out humorous (in twisted sense)
    sad and depressing in another sense because no matter
    how funny it is to associate this with someone we all know,
    it's someone else's...
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    I love that you've taken advice given and applied...

    I love that you've taken advice given and applied it, you're improving on
    every single piece you write, whether you realize it or not.
    I like the imagery you created in the first two lines,
    and...
  23. Thread: A Gift From Below

    by Rude
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    Welp, you already have me on the hook with...

    Welp, you already have me on the hook with Sarcophagus/Tutankhamen



    I find this section interesting (I'm reading this blindly btw
    I didn't skim thru first so everything I'm replying to is...
  24. So the topic/theme here intrigues me already. ...

    So the topic/theme here intrigues me already.
    I've always been a fan of dealing with demons
    (of both figurative and literal definition) The only
    thing I see here that makes leaves me to question...
  25. Thread: But like...

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    But, I haven't battled him yet.

    But, I haven't battled him yet.
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